I really liked how you incorporated the signalling principle into your blog. You bolded, underlined, and italicized words in your blog post and your twine story to give clear evidence of key information. This really allowed the audience to understand the most important aspects of the writing.
I also liked how you used the personalized principle both in your twine story and in your blog. This conversational style of writing allowed me to stay focused and engaged, without getting confused or distracted from a more formal style.
I wonder if you could have used the segmenting principle more in your blog post. Creating shorter paragraphs instead of more continuous, long units can help create learner-paced segments for the audience.
Overall, great job on an engaging, creative twine story and blog post.
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